Clouds were a bit harder. In fact, I think that especially for the clouds, you need the right support and the right media. Indeed it’s really much better not to have a white or off white paper for exemple….Clouds need times and observation and they go with a global composition….
The first drawing was very “shy”…..
The second one a bit more “assured” but not really cloudy
The third one just better…
Clouds need time and practice. I guess you only get the result you want by drawing and drawing again….